Draft of Open Letter

This post will primarily serve as a link to my draft of an open letter to my professor and peers. Now this is the story all about how my life got flipped - turned upside-down, I'd like to take a minute, just sit right there, I'll tell you how I became the writer I am today.

Children drawing. "Horses in meadow" 4/7/2015 via torange
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I think my letter is a bit awkward, so I guess the organization is my main concern. Beyond that, as always, I stress it's a rough draft. I'm also not sure if I was too pessimistic or self-critical. I though I did a pretty good job of describing my experience, but if it comes off as focused too much on the negatives, that'd be good to know.