BB, Chris. "Eye See You Two" 11/2/2007 via flickr.
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Firstly, I realized that I tend to leave out a lot of information which needs to be added. I need to develop the majority of my paragraphs further. Other than that, I feel that I did a good job organizing and transitioning between topics. In addition, I don't think I ever strayed too far off-topic, like I used to do a lot, so that's a huge step in the right direction.
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